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Referral request wording

Writing the reply that asks a contact to identify or introduce the person responsible for the relevant area.

Treat a referral request as a routing question. The contact should see why you wrote, understand the area where you need help, and choose a clear action without decoding the message. Make the introduction useful to the person being introduced, so the contact has a reason to pass you along. Choose the right contact and moment before polishing the sentence. Positive sentiment, receptiveness, and willingness to refer shape whether the wording gets a fair hearing.

Run the request in order

Use this sequence to move from choosing the person to asking for the introduction. Each stage removes a reason for the contact to delay or guess.

Stage What you are trying to learn Example question
Choose whether the contact has net positive sentiment toward your brand1 What has gone well enough that you would feel comfortable pointing me to the right person?
Time the moment when positive sentiment and willingness to refer are likely to be highest.2 The time when the audience is most receptive to your message.3 Is this a good time to ask about the right contact?
Context relevant details from your relationship.4 Whether a shared connection can give the request context.5 Can I refer to the conversation we had about this area?
Purpose what you want the recipient to do, stated plainly6 May I explain why I am trying to reach this person?
Ask the person you should speak with "Maybe you can help me out. Can you refer me to the person I should speak with?"7
Fit how you can help the person being introduced8 Would it help if I explain what we could do for them?
Action an easy action the contact can take9 Would you be comfortable making the introduction, or pointing me to the right contact?

Write the message

Order the message as relationship, purpose, route, benefit, action. Give the contact enough context to decide without turning the request into a long explanation.

A simple structure is:

Hi [name],

[Relevant detail from our conversation or shared connection.] I am reaching out because [purpose]. I am trying to find the person I should speak with about [area]. Could you point me to them? I can explain how we may help with [outcome]. If a direct introduction feels appropriate, would you be willing to make it?

Put the request in its own sentence. The contact should not have to infer whether you want a name, a forwarded note, or an introduction. Use the area they already know, explain why the person would care, and make the next choice easy.

After the ask, stop and let the contact choose. Move on when they give you a name, a route, or a clear decline. If they hesitate, use the advice route below instead of adding more explanation to the original request.

Use an advice route when needed

Some contacts hesitate because a direct request can sound salesy, pushy, or desperate. That concern is one reason people avoid asking for referrals consistently.10

Frame the message around advice: "Who would you suggest I speak with about [area], and what would be useful for me to know before I reach out?" Asking for advice is offered as a way to prompt referrals.11 Many people like being asked for advice and giving it because it makes them feel good about themselves.12 Advice can also leave the giver more invested in your success and wanting updates.13

When the contact points you toward someone, ask whether they would be comfortable making the introduction. If they prefer to give you a name, accept that route and make the next outreach easy to recognize by referring to who directed you there.

What not to do

The wording breaks down when it asks the contact to lend trust without giving them a clear reason or action.

  • You cannot shortcut relationships.14
  • Do not ask someone to stand behind work they have no reason to praise. Doing excellent work and delivering excellent service is the most important factor in getting referrals.15
  • Do not wait for the contact to volunteer the referral. Failing to ask makes obtaining referrals less likely.16
  • Do not end the buyer relationship after purchase. Doing so shuts the pipeline off from referrals.1718
  • Do not improvise the process every time. Mastering referral asking requires a process and practice, and scaling requires a referral system with referral-result KPIs.19

Sources

  1. 1
    “The people most likely to refer you i.e. those with a net positive sentiment towards your brand;”
  2. 2
    “The moments when that net positive sentiment is likely to be at its highest and, therefore, the willingness to refer at its greatest;”
  3. 3
    “When those audiences are most receptive to receiving a message from you;”
  4. 4
    “The whole point of a referral is to get a warm introduction, so don’t be afraid to reference things that have come up between you and the referrer.”
  5. 5
    “[insert what you have in common with person you are reaching out to (i.e., “I attended NYU and recently moved to Ohio.”].”
  6. 6
    “I’m always happy to talk to a candidate, but it definitely helps when the purpose of the message is loud and clear.”
  7. 7
    ““Maybe you can help me out. Can you refer me to the person I should speak with?””
  8. 8
    “Show that you can help the person you’d be introduced to.”
  9. 9
    “You’re giving them an easy action they can take.”
  10. 10
    “Yet, having surveyed 5,000 of our clients on why they were not asking for referrals on a consistent basis, two-thirds of them said they haven’t gotten into the habit of doing it and the other third of them said they were concerned they would sound salesy, pushy, or desperate.”
  11. 11
    “You will never have to ask them for a referral, all you need to do is ask them for their advice.”
  12. 12
    “Many people like to be asked for advice and many people like to give advice; because, it makes them feel good about themselves.”
  13. 13
    “When I give them my advice, I become more vested in their success and want to be kept in the loop on how they carried out the advice I gave them.”
  14. 14
    “You can’t shortcut relationships, and there are no shortcuts to how to ask for referrals.”
  15. 15
    “The absolute most important thing in getting referrals is to do amazing work and deliver excellent service.”
  16. 16
    “But if you don’t ask customers to refer you then you’ll be less likely to get referrals.”
  17. 17
    “One of the biggest mistakes in the world sales reps tend to make is that they abandon a buyer relationship after a purchase.”
  18. 18
    “But saying “sayonara” that quickly shuts off your pipeline from the absolute best type of lead in any industry—the referral.”
  19. 19
    “Mastering the skill requires a process, practice, and (in order to scale) a referral system with KPIs for referral results.”